I got the feedback comment from the professor of the essay proposal you wrote for me.
This is the comment she wrote me:
You begin by noting that in Atwood and Carter’s stories, the storyteller has the power to decide the fate of the characters. This is true, but it seems to me that this is true of any kind of story. What seems to me perhaps more interesting is the way in which Carter’s story shows a protagonist (the young girl) who takes control of her own story. And “Happy Endings” seems to be making fun of any author who pretends to be original — the story is always the same.
So, I think there is an interesting idea here but I think it might really be about how the storyteller doesn’t always have control. Or rather, these are stories that draw attention to themselves as constructions. You might also think about how the reader interprets the story.
So if you please can follow the feedback and write the entire essay of 5 pages about it.
I attached you the “essay proposal” you wrote for me so you can use that one and write other 5 pages with the feedback of the professor
I attached you also the instructions i already attached last time
Thank you