I have attached the essay, and the instructions
and the feedback of the professor is below included.

1. Remove repeated things In the essay
2. Include EVERYTHING the professor wants us to add by her feedback comment.

Her Feedback:
-the presentation did give us some sense of the online contents, you failed to engage with the crucial issue of advertising, even though I kept stressing the importance of this element in newspaper strategies
-the survey results also could’ve been made more engaging if, instead of going through each result that we could see, you had summarised what you were sharing. It was also unclear where the discussion of audiences came from
-more analytical in the paper, using descriptive information to illustrate the points you are making about the newspaper’s digital strategy.
-IMPORTANT: get into details of what you did for the content observations. Make sure to also cover the advertising/business model. Stay focused on strategy, rendering descriptive details to the service of making analytical points about a digital strategy.
You dont have to start over, but make sure the parts come together into a coherent whole.