I wrote a term paper that needs to be revised for full credit. This paper is a comparative study.

Teachers notes and corrections needed:

The term paper should be written in sentence/paragraph format. Your discussion presents as more of an “outline” or annotated bibliography of your sources.

Additionally, I read through your conclusion, and the feedback I can give is to be more specific in your discussion/comparison of studies. Avoid vague statements that are unclear or force the reader to go back in your paper and question, for example, “Which is study was Study 2 again?”